Typespecimen Crit

From the comments in the crit i learn that;

• The rational needs to be more concise and easy to follow as to how I made the type.
• Needs to be presented in a more professional format (front cover for booklet, or in poster format)
• The pastel colours help emphasise the simply and delicate style of the type. Although colours could be used more specifically and used to link to the typeface. 
• The wellbeing concept could be explored.
• Add texture and a 3d format tot he type (string) and play with size of type (not just A4)
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• Need diagrams to make it clear as to how the machine work. (images)